day 25

I think that so far my manuscript is good. I am still trying to figure out how I can put more about my culture into my story without making it sound like a research paper. I also think that I need to make my theme more noticeable through words and just not through the pictures.

But other than that my manuscript is like it should be and it is fun reading it to actually see that I wrote a decent children's story. This project has kind of made me want to write another story about something that interest me.